the maps below show the changes in the town after the construction of a hydroelectric power dam from 1990 to 2010

the maps below show the changes in the town after the construction of a hydroelectric power dam from 1990 to 2010
The given images illustrate how the
town
changed after the appearance of the hydrocarbon
dam
compared to 1990 and 2010.
Overall
, the
town
witnessed radical changes with the most noticeable being the electrical areas which replaced the cultural, natural and agricultural destinations and the construction of a lake and hotel
due to
the effect of the
dam
. Regarding the
town
in 1990, there were 2 main areas in both the barks of the river. The Western side included the forest and historical structure.
Besides
that more inhabitants
also
planted rare flora and took care of animals in front of the majestic mountains. Meanwhile, the irrigated farmlands and villages were constructed to serve the social and economic demands of residents between the mountain ranges in the Eastern area. After 20 years, the
town
had more significant changes
such
as building the hydroelectric power
dam
in the Northern position of the river. In the close proximity to the
dam
and mountains, there was the lake which was created by the construction of a hydrocarbon barrage and more residents
also
utilized the opportunity to concrete the hotel for local tourism.
Furthermore
, the electrical system replaced the 1990s destinations and was built on both sides of the river
due to
the appearance of a
dam
. Notwithstanding, the villages remained in the same position in the period from 1990 to 2010.
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