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The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. *Fairtrade: a category of products for which farmers from developing countries have been paid an officially agreed fair price.

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. *Fairtrade: a category of products for which farmers from developing countries have been paid an officially agreed fair price.
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The given table provides the data related to
sales
 of Fairtrade coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 among several European nations.
Overall
, it can be seen that in 1999 Switzerland was the biggest in
sales
while
 Sweden spent less than one
million
euros
 on those products. During the next five years , the UK experienced a major increase in
sales
 and reached twenty
million
euros
 in 2004 . Analysing the given graph , it can be noticed that Switzerland was the highest in
sales
 numbers (3
million
euros
),
while
 Sweden was the lowest with about 800000
euros
 in 1999. The UK, Denmark , and Belgium had similar numbers , with Denmark being the biggest buyer at about 1.8
million
euros
 in 1999. Next , the UK was the biggest buyer among the five countries with about 20
million
,
whereas
 Sweden bought 1
million
 and was the smallest in 2004 .
Lastly
 , Switzerland held the second place in
sales
 ( 6
million
) ,
while
 Denmark and Belgium showed similar results in 2004.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, million, euros with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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