The chart below shows the proportion of people's total spending in a particular European country was spent on different commodities and services in 1958 and in 2008.
The provided pie graph gives information about the percentage of consumption of surfaces in a certain country in Europe and individual years(1958 and 2008).
Overall
, it can be seen that clothing was the highest consumer in the first year, Linking Words
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housing was the most common spender in the second year. Linking Words
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initially
luxury goods and food were the lowest amount, Add a comma
initially,
while
travel and transportation were the least in the second year.
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To begin
with, the housing sector was Linking Words
initially
20% and rose significantly to 32. Linking Words
Moreover
, luxury goods and food witnessed a noticeable increase in 2008. It stood at 7% and 8% respectively in 1958, Linking Words
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it had a gradual rise in 2008 17% for the two services.
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On the other hand
, the remaining commodities experienced a sharp decrease. Spent 30% of buying clothes in 1958, but it had a dramatic drop in 2008 by 12 percentage. Linking Words
Also
, entertainment section
had a slight decline in 2008 from 18% to 16%. Linking Words
In addition
, the travelling and transportation sector declined to 6% in 2008.Linking Words
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
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