The supplied pie charts above represents the data collected in 1980 and 2000, about units of electricity production by fuel source in Australia and France.

The supplied pie charts above represents the data collected in 1980 and 2000, about units of electricity production by fuel source in Australia and France.
The
provided
Verb problem
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pie graph gives information about the production of electricity by
the
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particular source that includes, coal, oil, natural gas, and hydropower in
both
countries namely, Australia and France and in the individual years 1980 and 2000.
Overall
, it can be seen that was the most common consumer in
both
years. Meanwhile, was the least producer in
both
years. Some of the electricity production witnessed a drop
while
others a rise.
To begin
with, the highest source of production was coal, it stopped at 50
units
in 1980, and had a dramatic increase to 130
units
in 2000.
Moreover
, the consumption of hydropower was
initially
20
units
, and it had a noticeable rise in 2000 to 36
units
.
On the other hand
, consuming oil and natural gas experienced a significant decrease, at 10
units
and 20
units
respectively in 1980.
However
, it declined significantly to 2
units
for
both
sources.
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