The diagrams below show the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show the process for recycling plastic bottles.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pictures tell us about the cycle of used
plastic
bottles in our daily lives.
Overall
, there are some stages in the cycles and the report will give a brief description of the main stages in the cycles. The process
was began
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when the used
plastic
bottles were thrown away. It was transported to the recycling centre by truck and sorted. After that, the selected used
plastic
bottles were compressed into
plastic
blocks.
Next,
the
plastic
blocks were crushed and turned into
plastic
chips by the machines. The
plastic
chips were washed to make them clean. In the subsequent stage, the
plastic
pellets were produced by putting
plastic
chips into the machines. The
plastic
pellets were heated to form raw material.
Finally
, the end products were produced using the raw material. It will be used for a long time until it is thrown away and the used
plastic
cycle will be started again.
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