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The diagrams below show the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pictures tell us about the cycle of used
plastic
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 bottles in our daily lives.
Overall
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, there are some stages in the cycles and the report will give a brief description of the main stages in the cycles. The process
was began
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began
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 when the used
plastic
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 bottles were thrown away. It was transported to the recycling centre by truck and sorted. After that, the selected used
plastic
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 bottles were compressed into
plastic
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 blocks.
Next,
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the
plastic
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 blocks were crushed and turned into
plastic
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 chips by the machines. The
plastic
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 chips were washed to make them clean. In the subsequent stage, the
plastic
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 pellets were produced by putting
plastic
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 chips into the machines. The
plastic
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 pellets were heated to form raw material.
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, the end products were produced using the raw material. It will be used for a long time until it is thrown away and the used
plastic
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 cycle will be started again.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words plastic with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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