The diagrams below show the process for making sugar from sugarcane. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The figures tell us

the

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how to produce

sugar

from sugarcane.

Overall

, there are seven steps to turn

sugarcanes

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sugarcane

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into

sugar

that we can consume in our daily

life

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. The process

were

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divided into two main stages, in the field and in the

factory

. The processes in the field

were begin

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by growing the

sugarcanes

for about 12-18 months. When the

sugarcanes

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sugarcane

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were

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is

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old enough,

it

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will

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be harvested manually by the farmers or with

help

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of machines.

Then

, the

sugarcanes

were brought into the

factory

for the next stages. The processes in the

factory

were started after the

sugarcanes

will be

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brougt

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brought

into the

factory

. After that, the

sugarcanes

were crushed with the machine to get the juice from it.

Next,

the juice was purified using

limestone

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filter. After that, the purified juice will be poured into

hot

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a hot

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evaporator that will turn it into syrup.

Then

, the syrup will be poured into

centrifuge

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a centrifuge

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machine which

separated

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the

sugar

crystals from the syrup.

Last

, the

sugar

crystals will be dried and cooled.