The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The
barchart
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bar chart
indicates the percentage of
housholds
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households
in owned and rented accommodation in two countries
likes
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England and Wales from 1918 to 2011. The percentage of those owning a house shows an upward trend
while
the figure for rented properties decreased during
this
time.
In addition
, for most of the period, renting a house was more popular than owning a house
while
home ownership overlook renting over the final 30 years. In 1918, household ownership stood at around 23% compared to rentals which were at nearly 80%. From that, there was a steady rise in ownership and
decline
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a decline
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in rentals
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