The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 

2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and 

the charts show how it was distributed.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and 

make comparisons where relevant
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The table and chart given provide information about the origin and spending of the police
budget
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for 2017 and 2018.
Overall
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, the
budget
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had an increase in 2018 compared to 2017. It was salaries that remained the category spent most in both years. They came mostly from the national government, which provided the police with 175,7
million
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pounds in 2017 and 177,8 in 2018 (equivalent to a 2,1
million
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pound increase).
This
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category made up more than half of the total
budget
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in both years. Local tax income is relatively lower compared to the previous category but it still contributed to 91,2
million
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pounds in 2017 and had an 11,1
million
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pounds increase in 2018. The rest of the money came from other sources,
such
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as grants. In terms of spending, salaries take the lead, with 75% of the
budget
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in 2017 and 69% in 2018.
In contrast
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, technology reported considerably low spending as it ranged from 8% to 14%. Buildings and transport spending remain the same in both years, making up 17% of the total
budget
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words budget, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "provide" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fiscal allocations
  • Revenue streams
  • Budgetary oversight
  • Expenditure
  • Financial appropriation
  • Government grants
  • Local taxation
  • Operational costs
  • Capital investment
  • Public safety
  • Crime prevention
  • Community policing
  • Resource allocation
  • Year-on-year comparison
  • Budgetary constraints
  • Fiscal year
  • Fund disbursement
  • Budget deficit/surplus
  • Trend analysis
  • Financial sustainability
  • Law enforcement funding
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