The chart below gives information on the global sale of hybrid vehicles between 2006 and 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The chart below gives information on the global sale of hybrid vehicles between 2006 and 2009.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The chart given shows how the sale of hybrid vehicles worldwide varied between the 3-year period of 2006 and 2009.
Overall
,
Japan
and the sum of other
countries
underwent an increase every year,
while
the US struggled to maintain a stable
sales
rate. During 2006, the electric vehicle
sales
in
Japan
and the total in other
countries
were similar, at nearly 50
thousand
sales
. The
sales
underwent a rise in 2007, with the
sales
in
Japan
reaching more than 50
thousand
and the total in other
countries
at almost 100
thousand
. These numbers continued to rise in 2006, as
Japan
and the other
countries
achieved roughly the same amount of
sales
at 100
thousand
. During 2008,
Japan
's
sales
had a huge boost, increasing by approximately 240
thousand
sales
, equivalent to about 340
thousand
sales
; meanwhile,
sales
in other
countries
only rose an insignificant amount.
While
the number of
sales
in other
countries
significantly increased throughout the year, the US seemed to struggle. In 2006,
sales
in the US remained the highest in the three categories, with 250
thousand
sales
. By 2007,
this
number had increased by exactly 100
thousand
sales
.
However
, in 2008 and 2009, the number of
sales
dropped, with only more than 300
thousand
in 2008 and less than 300
thousand
in 2009.
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