The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The maps depict the outskirts of the Norbiton industrial
area
now and what it
will be planned in the future. Correct pronoun usage
apply
Overall
, the industrial area
will become a living area
and lots of living facilities will be added.
The most prominent change is that all the factories will be teared
down and a new roundabout will be constructed to the south of the original circular Correct your spelling
torn
road
. Then
, a new road
will be erected across the river with a housing area
along with
it. What's more, another new road
will be built on the northeast of the original roundabout, and two living areas are about to be built along the road
and at the end
of the road
.
There are also
extensive changes can
be seen on the map. Lots of shops will be constructed to the southwest of the original circular Correct pronoun usage
that can
road
. What's more, a medical centre is planned to the southeast of the original roundabout. Last
but not least, a school will be erected at the end
of the original long road
on the east of the original circular road
, and along the road
there's Add a comma
road,
also
a new playground and three housing areas.
In conclusion, the whole area
will be tranformed
from Correct your spelling
transformed
a
industrial Change the article
an
area
to a living area
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