The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The maps depict the outskirts of the Norbiton industrial

area

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now and what

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apply

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will be planned in the future.

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, the industrial

area

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will become a living

area

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and lots of living facilities will be added. The most prominent change is that all the factories will be

teared

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torn

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down and a new roundabout will be constructed to the south of the original circular

road

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Then

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, a new

road

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will be erected across the river with a housing

area

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along with

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it. What's more, another new

road

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will be built on the northeast of the original roundabout, and two living areas are about to be built along the

road

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and

at the end

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of the

road

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. There are

also

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extensive changes

can

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that can

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be seen on the map. Lots of shops will be constructed to the southwest of the original circular

road

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. What's more, a medical centre is planned to the southeast of the original roundabout.

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but not least, a school will be erected

at the end

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of the original long

road

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on the east of the original circular

road

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, and along the

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road

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road,

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there's

also

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a new playground and three housing areas. In conclusion, the whole

area

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will be

tranformed

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transformed

from

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industrial

area

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to a living

area

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, at the end".

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words area, road with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

209 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

industrial area
planned future development
factories
warehouses
railway line
shopping center
residential buildings
college
mixed-use zone
commercial
residential
educational
green spaces
pedestrian walkways
housing
community
retail services
revitalize
quality of life
vibrant
sustainable

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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Professional workers like doctors, nurses and teachers make a greater contribution to society and so should be paid more than sports and entertainment personalities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?