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The chart below gives information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010.

The chart below gives information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010.
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The bar chart shows the percentage of people who live in the UK and send money to charity by age
range
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. The period for the data is between 1990 and 2010. In 1990, the 36 to 50 age
range
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 was the highest group to give money to help Bristish's charity about 42 per
cent
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 followed by the 51 to 65 at 35 per
cent
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, the up to 65 at approximately 32 per
cent
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, the 26 to 35 at about 31 per
cent
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, and the 18 to 25 just 17 per
cent
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.
However
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, In 2010, two trends changed among those groups.
Firstly
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, the proportion of the highest group in 1990, the 36 to 50 age, decreased from 42 per
cent
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 to 35 per
cent
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,
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, the 26 to 35 dropped by 7 per
cent
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 and the lowest
range
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 in 1990, the 18 to 25,
also
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 dramatically changed down to just only 7 per
cent
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 in the latest year.
In contrast
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, the other groups, which
is
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are
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 the up to 65 and the 51 to 65, had
upward
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an upward
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 trend increasing by 3 per
cent
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 and 4 per
cent
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 respectively. To summarise, the 51 to 65
range
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 becomes the
most
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highest
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 percentage of the group that transfers money to charity in
United
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the United
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 Kingdom followed by the up to 65
range
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, which ranked
second,
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while
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 the other three groups have a reducing direction.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words range, cent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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