The chart shows the proportion of renewable energy in total energy supply in 4 countries from 1997 to 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The percentage of renewable
energy
in Use synonyms
total
Correct article usage
the total
energy
supply from 4 regions is depicted in the bar chart from 1997 until 2010.
In 1997, Australia showed a low proportion Use synonyms
in
Change preposition
of
their
eco-friendly Correct pronoun usage
apply
energy
which was about 10 Use synonyms
tons
. Use synonyms
This
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also
happened in Sweden Linking Words
with was
showed the smallest percentage. Both countries had been showing insignificant improvement in Verb problem
which
comparing
to other countries. Replace the word
comparison
While
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Australia
Change noun form
Australia's
energy
supply Use synonyms
decrease
slightly Wrong verb form
decreased
year
by Use synonyms
year
, those in Sweden rose Use synonyms
up
delicately which was approximately 5 and 9 Change preposition
apply
tons
respectively.
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On the other hand
, Linking Words
other northside country
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another northside country
other northside countries
such
as Iceland pictured a good improvement Linking Words
to utilize
their renewable Change preposition
in utilizing
energy
which brought Use synonyms
this
region to have the highest proportion of supply Linking Words
energy
among others which was about 50-70 Use synonyms
tons
all over the Use synonyms
year
given. Turkey the country between Asia and Europe has Use synonyms
benefit
from their location Change the verb form
benefited
due to
the fossil fuel. Linking Words
However
, Linking Words
this
country Linking Words
also
showed a proper percentage of their renewable Linking Words
energy
supply which was about 37-40 Use synonyms
tons
in 1997 and 2000 even though the number fell Use synonyms
down
to 35 in the Change preposition
apply
last
Linking Words
year
. Use synonyms
This
situation showed that Linking Words
Icelanded
Correct your spelling
Iceland
as well as
Turkey have been showing a good commitment Linking Words
in
eco-friendly Change preposition
to
energy
Use synonyms
purpose
.Fix the agreement mistake
purposes
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