The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart compares the amount of electricity
production
and consumption
for the top ten countries
in billion
kWh
in 2014.
Looking from an overall
perspective, it is apparent that China consumed and produced more electrical energy
compared to other countries
, and the least number provided by Korea and Rep. Also
, many countries
produced more energy
than they consumed in 2014.
With 5,398 billion
kWh
of production
and 5,322 billion
kWh
of consumption
, China placed at the top in 2014, and the United States was second,
with 4,099 billion
kWh
of electrical power production
and 3,866 billion
kWh
of consumption
. Korea and Rep were placed at the end
, with only 485.1 billion
of production
and 449.5 billion
of consuming electrical energy
.
Russia produced 1,057 billion
kWh
in 2014 and placed third,
and its energy
consumption
was close to its production
. The amount of energy
produced by Canada, India Japan was between 600 and 940 billion
kWh
, and their electrical power consumption
was approximately 100 billion
kWh
lower than their production
. For France, Brazil, and Germany, both electrical energy
usage and production
were between 520 and 561 billion
kWh
. It is worth mentioning that except for Germany, all countries
produced more energy
than they consumed.Submitted by amir1375.6 on
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