The line graph shows the percentages of Australian export with four countries. The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to 4 countries from 1990 to 2012
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Line chart depicts the proportion of Australian exports to four nations between 1990 and 2012. It is clear from the graph that, United
States , Correct article usage
the United
Japan
represent approximately the same rates during these years Correct word choice
and Japan
whereas
India
and China
start with aroun
the same pattern at the Correct your spelling
around
beggining
Correct your spelling
beginning
then
China
rates Change noun form
China's
get rised
and Wrong verb form
rose
India
figures declined.
Change noun form
India's
According to
what is shown, in 1990 Japan reach
27 % of Wrong verb form
reached
exports
rate Correct article usage
the exports
then
it had a drip with 20% in 1995, the next years we can see the percentages around the same in other word
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words
US
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the US
start
with about 12% Wrong verb form
started
percent
at Change the spelling
per cent
first
year Change the article
the first
then
droped
slightly with 4% after that it has Correct your spelling
dropped
grew
again as the same at first Change the verb form
grown
then
it has plunged gradually . Also
, India
has the most mionr
percentages at Correct your spelling
minor
first
time with about 1% Change the article
the first
then
it gradually rised
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raised
rise
rose
with
about 8% Change preposition
to
then
slightly driped
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dripped
dried
at
2012 with around 6%. Change preposition
in
Furthermore
, China
has the most significant numbers during this
period starting with minor
ratio Correct article usage
a minor
about
2% which Change preposition
of about
has
near to Verb problem
is
India
then
it has a massive decreased
as we can see Replace the word
decrease
in
Change preposition
apply
last
year it has
30% which is the major.
Verb problem
was
To sum
up
we could say that, The Australian exports proportion to Japan, Add a comma
up,
China
has the most and the other countries has
the Change the verb form
have
modest
.Correct quantifier usage
most modest
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