The charts below show the results of a questionnaire that asked visitors to the Parkway Hotel how they rated the hotel's customer service. The same questionnaire was given to 100 guests in the years 2005 and 2010.

The charts below show the results of a questionnaire that asked visitors to the Parkway Hotel how they rated the hotel's customer service. The same questionnaire was given to 100 guests in the years 2005 and 2010.
The two pie charts compare the results of
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customer
service
in the Parkway Hotel in 2005 and 2010.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that customer satisfaction was significantly better in 2010 compared to 2005. Looking into details in 2005 only 5
percent
and 14
percent
of
customers
responded as excellent and good respectively. Most part of
customers
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responded as satisfactory. Reminder
customers
were not satisfied with customer
service
,
specifically
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21
percent
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said poor and 15
percent
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very poor. In 2010 the percentage of
customers
who responded as excellent and good increased markedly.
For example
excellent made 28
percent
while
good made 39
percent
. 17
percent
of responders said satisfactory which was much less than that of 2005. Poor and very poor responses from
customers
were
also
far less than in 2010 compared to 2005.
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poor
service
was 17
percent
meantime very poor
service
was 12
percent
.
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