The line graph shows the percentages of Australian exports with four countries.

The line graph shows the percentages of Australian exports with four countries.
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The line graph gives information about the
proportion
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of Australian
exports
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with
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four different countries
such
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as Japan ,
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China
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, the United States of America and
India
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from 1990 to 2012 .
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, both the US and the
China
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rates rose at the beginning of the given
period
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,
however
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, the percentage of the US increased rapidly
at the end
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of the
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whereas
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the percentage of Japan declined slowly
year
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on
year
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until
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at
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the end of the
period
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. In terms of the
proportion
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of
India
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went up gradually throughout the given
period
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. In 1990 , the
proportion
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of
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China
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and
India
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started at
same
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level and
then
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the
China
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rates increased gradually until
in
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the
year
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of
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2000 .
Following
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this
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, there was a rapid
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rise
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in the
China
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rates with almost 10
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percent
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. It is interesting to know that , it shot up at the
starting
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of
the
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2005 and at
this
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time it reached a peak
25
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of 25
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percent
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.
Then
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, the
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of
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India
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exports
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levelled off in
three -
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the three-year
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year
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period
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and
then
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, it improved slowly with almost 7
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percent
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. By 2010 , it decreased minimally
with
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about 5
percent
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.When it comes to the
proportion
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of Japan , there was a gradual decline in the
three -
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three-year
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year
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period
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. By 2000 , it stabilized
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at
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17
percent
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. Another interesting point from the graph was that
,
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it went down slowly
then
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levelled off
at the end
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of the
period
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. In terms of the percentage of
the
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US
exports
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, there was a rapid decrease at the
starting
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of the
period
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then
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, apart from some gradual increase , it decreased steadily
with
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to
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5
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percent
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per cent
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. By 2012 , the
proportion
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of
the
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US
exports
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improved
with
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by
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6
percent
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.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "at the end".
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 78%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words proportion, exports, china, india, period, year, percent with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "gives" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "went up" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "improved" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rapidly" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slowly" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • percentage
  • exports
  • timeline
  • analyze
  • significant increase/decrease
  • trade relationships
  • economic dependencies
  • stability
  • fluctuation
  • political events
  • Country A/B/C/D
  • trends
  • insights
  • compare/comparison
  • examine
  • reveal
  • indicate
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