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from 1990 to 2012 .
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, both the US and the China
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, however
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of the period
whereas
the percentage of Japan declined slowly year
on year
until at
the end of the Change preposition
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period
. In terms of the proportion
of India
went up gradually throughout the given period
.
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of the
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China
and India
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level and Add an article
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then
the China
rates increased gradually until in
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year
of
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China
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