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Band 6.5

The two maps below show the changes that have taken place in the town of Westley since 1815. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The two maps show the extent to which
Westley
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 has changed over two centuries to become a more modern and built-up town.
Overall
Linking Words
, a great deal of changes
has
Correct subject-verb agreement
have
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 been made to
Westley
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 since 1815 . the only thing remaining the same is the Lake Linton .A railroad has replaced the road to London over the years . All greeneries have been replaced with places of public interest .
Westley
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 has changed over to a township over the years In 1815 there was a road over the river twine to London , which was replaced by the new railway line having a station in the township .The inside roads
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Linking Words
 have been developed and extended over the years . The area of the open fields has been occupied by the railway station . Towards the Tinton Village, the old Lord
Westley
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's House has been demolished and the place is currently having a hotel and pub . The area of the old market square , town hall and houses has been modified into business and shopping areas by demolishing the houses

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words westley with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "show" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • residential area
  • amenities
  • thoroughfare
  • connectivity
  • industrial development
  • factory
  • public amenities
  • recreational facilities
  • educational facilities
  • residential expansion
  • apartment blocks
  • commercial activity
  • shopping centers
  • restaurants
  • single-family homes
  • development
  • open field
  • noticeable change
  • replacing
  • establishment
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