You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The line graph shows the percentages of Australian export with four countries. The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to 4 countries from 1990 to 2012 You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The line graph shows the percentages of Australian export with four countries.

The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to 4 countries from 1990 to 2012

You should write at least 150 words.
The line diagram shows the percentage of
Australian
exports to four countries from 1990 to 2012. The
Australian
goods
are exported to four different countries they are Japan, USA, China and India.
Australia
started to
export
their
goods
to Japan at the beginning of 1990 during that time their
export
percentage
rate
was around 27 after the years started moving forward the
export
of
Australian
goods
was reduced to Japan in 2012.
Also
, the
goods
which were exported to the USA decreased after 2000 and now they started to increase their
export
with a rise of 2% it was around 7%. China was the only country that imported more
goods
from
Australia
. During the period of 1990, the
export
rate
of
Australia
to China was very low. After the 2000 suddenly
export
rate
was boosted now it is one of the countries that imports more
Australian
goods
. India still maintains a flow of
goods
which were exported from
Australia
in the period of 2010 the
export
rate
was boosted and in 2012 it decreased.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words australian, goods, australia, export, rate with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • percentage
  • export
  • trend
  • time period
  • individually
  • comparison
  • significant changes
  • notable anomalies
  • influenced
  • increase
  • decrease
  • fluctuation
  • steady
  • sharp rise
  • sharp decline
  • stagnation
  • data
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