The map shows the town of Stokeford in 1930 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The map shows the town of Stokeford in 1930 and 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The
map
shows the
town
of
Stokeford
in 1930 and 2010.
Overall
, as you can see obviously, there are significant changes between the first
map
of the
town
of
Stokeford
in 1930 and the
second
map
of the
town
of
Stokeford
in 1930. Especially, it is noticeable that the number of houses increased rapidly on the
second
map
.
In contrast
, there is farmland on the first
map
whereas
, there is no farmland on the
second
map
. The post office remains both of two maps on the same location.
However
, the shops next to post offices disappeared on the
second
map
. And it cannot be seen that cows in the
town
of
Stokeford
in 2010 appeared in the
town
of
Stokeford
in 1930. The big gardens were replaced with retirement homes. And a primary school expanded between 1993 and 2010. To summarise, the
town
of
Stokeford
in 1930 turned into a residential area and a school district in 2010.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 100%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words map, town, stokeford, second with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 8 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • town
  • population
  • transformed
  • bustling
  • road network
  • residential areas
  • industrial sites
  • commercial zones
  • river
  • public transportation
  • infrastructure
  • schools
  • hospitals
  • shopping centers
  • educational facilities
  • healthcare facilities
  • urbanization
  • development
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