The diagram below showthe coastal village of Seaville in 1980 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below showthe coastal village of Seaville in 1980 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The two maps illustrate Seaville, where was the coastal village, in 2 various years( 1980 and 2010).

Overall

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, The number of not only people who live in

this

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district but

also

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facilities for passengers has increased.

However

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, it was crucial that the vegetation area

destroy

Wrong verb form

be destroyed

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According to

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the pictures, in the first year, we can see the equipment that travellers could use was a hotel, Holiday cottage, and tea room;

nevertheless

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, in the

last

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year the hotel was in

last

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place, but the holiday cottage moved to near East bank, which was in the same place in 2 times, and tea room replaced by

restaurant

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the restaurant

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;

furthermore

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, sound dunes, near the tea room, have been changing to the new hotel. The graphs demonstrate in 1980,

this

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region had a big area which did not have anything near the river ;

thereafter

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, in 2010, it was built a retirement village and boat club, that

was

Correct subject-verb agreement

were

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the river beach

, .

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In addition

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, the woodland was altered to a golf course;

additionally

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, in 2010, we can see a massive residential zone

instead

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of an old holiday cottage and marsh.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".

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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.

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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

186 words

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The diagram below showthe coastal village of Seaville in 1980 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

In some countries there are more young people choosing to enrol in work-based training instead of attending university. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

You have just returned from holiday and were not satisfied with your trip. Write to the travel agency. In your letter •Say where / when you went on holiday •Explain why you are not satisfied with your holiday •Tell them what you would like them to do

Many people use distance learning programmes to study at home, but others think that it cannot bring the benefits as much as attending college or university. To what extent do you agree or disagree.