The diagram below show the coastal village of Seaville in 1980 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below show the coastal village of Seaville in 1980 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two maps illustrate Seaville, where was the coastal village, in 2 various years( 1980 and 2010).
Overall
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, The number of not only people who live in
this
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district but
also
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facilities for passengers has increased.
However
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, it was crucial that the vegetation area be destroyed.
According to
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the pictures, in the first year, we can see the equipment that travellers could use was a hotel, Holiday cottage, and tea room;
nevertheless
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, in the
last
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year the hotel was in
last
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place, but the holiday cottage moved to near East bank, which was in the same place in 2 times, and tea room replaced by the restaurant;
furthermore
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, sound dunes, near the tea room, have been changing to the new hotel. The graphs demonstrate in 1980,
this
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region had a big area which did not have anything near the river ;
thereafter
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, in 2010, it was built a retirement village and boat club, that were on the river beach.
In addition
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, the woodland was altered to a golf course;
moreover
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, in 2010, we can see a massive residential zone
instead
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of an old holiday cottage and marsh.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • coastal village
  • underwent significant changes
  • small settlement
  • developed and structured area
  • limited number of houses
  • coastline
  • constructed inland
  • population growth
  • very few amenities
  • shift towards a more self-sufficient community
  • transport infrastructure
  • narrow roads
  • wider roads and pathways
  • connectivity
  • coastline
  • pier or jetty
  • seaside activities
  • tourism
  • natural areas
  • preserve natural landscapes
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