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The line graph shows the change in the amount of electricity used during a day in two seasons and pie chart indicates the different uses of electricity. Describe the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The line graph shows the change in the amount of electricity used during a day in two seasons and pie chart indicates the different uses of electricity. Describe the main features and make comparisons where relevant
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The figures illustrate the
electricity
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 daily used in
winter
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 and summer and the type of appointment that it
are
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 used in
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winter
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the winter
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 season. As can be seen, the
electricity
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demand
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 in
winter
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higher
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is higher
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 rather than in summer and the most noticeable of
appointment
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appointments
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 that use high
electricity
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 are heating rooms and heating water.
The
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In the
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 first graph, starting
day
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the day
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 at 0 a.
m
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. the
units
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 of
electricity
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 in
winter
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 stood at around 30.000,
then
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 it
increase
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increased
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 to 40.000
units
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. After that, the
electricity
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demand
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 back to
at
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apply
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around 30.000
units
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 at 6 a.
m
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. Following that, start at 9 a.
m
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. until around
at
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apply
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20 p.
m
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. gradually
climb
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climbing
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 from approximately 35.000 to 45.000
units
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. The
demand
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 for
electricity
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 reached a peak at 21 p.
m
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. just above 50.000
units
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.
Subsequently
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, there was
a
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the
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 same position at around 30.000
units
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.
In contrast
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, in summer
was
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there was
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 a flat
demand
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 from 0 a.
m
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. until 24 p.
m
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. just below 20.000
units
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.
The
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In the
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 second graph, the most
higher
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used for
electricity
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 in
winter
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 is heating rooms and heating water around 52.5%, followed by ovens, kettles,
washing
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and washing
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machine
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machines
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 around 17.5%. The third place lighting , TV, and radio used 15.0%
electricity
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 that the
ame
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same
game
 with vacuum cleaners, food mixes and electric tools.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words electricity, winter, demand, m, units with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 6 times.
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