The table below shows the results of surveys in 2005, 2010 and 2015 about McGill University. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and makecomparisons where relevant
The
feedback
has 5 different categories first teaching quality second library resources third student services fourth range of modules offered fifth sports and social facilities.
To begin
with,teaching quality back in 2005 the result was 74%,within five years
the feedback
decreased by 2%.After that,it rose to 78%.Going to library resources the students were able to find a good amount of resources the results scored 86% after 5 years
went up by 2 per cent extra 5 more years
it experienced a decrease hitting 87%.The student services at the university were quite low approximately 54% which shows an upward trend in five years
reaching 81 percentage that's really good feedback
which means the University improved its services in the year 2015 it hit the highest among all facilities reaching 95%.However
,the range of modules did not have good feedback
in 2005 the number of students doing the survey was 39% it kept going down by 8 per cent in 2010 after five years
it hit the lowest among them reaching 25% .Furthermore
, sports and social facilities remained constant for 15 years
and had no change at all.
To sum up
, student service hits the highest point.On the other hand
, the range of modules illustrates a downward trend.Submitted by saeeddjcj80 on
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