The map shows the town of Stokeford in 1930 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The map shows the town of Stokeford in 1930 and 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
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The map, which depicts great detail, illustrates the revolution of Stokeford town over an 80-year period (1930-2010).
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, it can be observed that there have been significant changes to infrastructure, housing, and facilities. Plus, the farmlands were totally diminished over the given timeline. Diving deeper, in 1930, there were merely a minority of houses in Stokeford in the north.
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, the residential area experienced the biggest development in 2010, with more than 50 buildings that were added.
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, an educational institution in the east
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saw a considerable expansion but no additional facilities were installed, and in front of it, two shops were built next to each other. Turning to the farmlands that were
initially
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situated on the left of the school and river stoke, it had been removed completely in 2010, leaving vast and empty areas.
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, a humongous house was converted into a retirement home, though the size was reduced by half since the gardens in front of it were eliminated.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • town
  • population
  • transformed
  • bustling
  • road network
  • residential areas
  • industrial sites
  • commercial zones
  • river
  • public transportation
  • infrastructure
  • schools
  • hospitals
  • shopping centers
  • educational facilities
  • healthcare facilities
  • urbanization
  • development
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