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The table shows a breakdown of the most popular languages taken by native English speakers studying at the UK Centre for the Foreign Language Learning in 2020. Summarise the charts by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table shows a breakdown of the most popular languages taken by native English speakers studying at the UK Centre for the Foreign Language Learning in 2020. Summarise the charts by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart illustrates a breakdown of famous languages taken by native English speakers studying at the UK Centre for
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Foreign Language Learning in 2010. The units of measurement were given in percentages.
Overall
, Mandarin had the highest percentage of
women
 scholars and Italian had the lowest figure as far as
women
 learners were concerned.
On
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men
, a high
number
 studied Arabic and a low
number
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 Polish.
However
, Spanish had an equal percentage for both
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 and
female
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.
Firstly
, Most
women
 took
Mandarin
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 language
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 is 27% and a low
number
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3 per cent was witnessed
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 those who were studying Italian. When it came to
men
, a large
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 Arabic as a subject and only 3% studied Polish.
However
, Spanish had 19% on both
men
 and
women
 who studied it.
Women
 taking Arabic and French were 10 per cent respectively
whereas
men
 studying French and Italian were 5 per cent.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 73%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words women, men, number with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • breakdown
  • native English speakers
  • UK Centre for Foreign Language Learning
  • main features
  • comparisons
  • most popular
  • significance
  • notable trends
  • reflected in
  • traditional preferences
  • least popular
  • perceived difficulty
  • potential implications
  • geographical proximity
  • cultural ties
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