The two maps below show the village of Bunborough in the present day and plans for the village in 2024. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The two diagrams represent the Bunborough Village now few houses .
as well as
the planned developments there to be finished by 2024
Overall
, at present Bunborough looks like a place where fishing is the main attraction . whereas
after the modifications the same will be changed to a location with more tourist attractions .Along with
increased travel facilities to approach the place .
At present there is only one road connecting the village from the main highway to Lynwich and Maychester
. Correct your spelling
Manchester
In addition
, it has a couple of shops near the fishing port along with
Correct article usage
a
Whereas
, after the development by 2024 autumn the travel network will be drastically improved with the addition of more connecting roads within the area. As well as
a new railroad will pass through there . The previous fishing port will be converted into a resort with walkways . A couple of hotels also
will come up in the place ,and as a result
, the current fishing village of Bunborough will be modified into a tourist destinationSubmitted by drcamt on
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