The map shows the town of Stokeford in 1930 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The map shows the town of Stokeford in 1930 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The thesis maps demonstrate

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the changes that have happened in the country of Stokeford from 1930 TO 2010 . it is clear from that map that there are more housing in 2010

According to

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what is shown , in the north of the map remove farmland and add

houses

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also

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, in 2010 the shops were removed and put

instead

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shops

houses

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, and

street

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a street

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furthermore

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we can see the primary school

get

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getting

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bigger In the sou th we

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can see the farmland

removed

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and

houses

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in addition

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, the garden was removed and

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large

houses

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2010 . they add a retirement house

To sum up

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, we could say that have a lot of changes the biggest is putting more

houses

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and removing farmland

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.

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Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words houses with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

128 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

town
population
transformed
bustling
road network
residential areas
industrial sites
commercial zones
river
public transportation
infrastructure
schools
hospitals
shopping centers
educational facilities
healthcare facilities
urbanization
development

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