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the table below highlights data on the number of travellers using three major british airports between 1998 and 2003. summerize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

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The table shows information about how many travellers used three major British airports over a five-year period between 1998 and 2003.
Overall
, there was an upward trend in the
number
 of visitors to Stansted and Gatwick,
while
 Heathrow saw some significant ups and downs during the period.
According to
 the details, as regards Heathrow, Having risen from 27.2
million
 to 48.2
million
people
 in the first three years, the
number
 of visitors
then
 decreased gradually to 33.2
million
people
 in 2002,
subsequently
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 the
number
 recovered to 45.6
million
people
 in 2003.
Conversely
, the
number
 of visitors to Gatwick rose moderately from 36.5
million
 to 51.1
million
people
 between 1998 and 2002, at which point the
number
 rocketed to 69.3
million
people
 in 2003, being the highest
number
 during the period in question. If we look at
Stansted
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 airport, there was a striking increase from 17.3
million
 to 43.3
million
people
 until 2001 and
then
 the
number
 of travellers remained stable in the
last
 years.
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task achievement
Ensure that fluctuations such as those in Heathrow are clearly stated for better clarity.
coherence cohesion
To improve coherence, ensure each paragraph flows logically from one point to the next.
task achievement
The essay provides a complete response to the task, touching on all three airports and giving specific data points.
coherence cohesion
The introduction sets a clear context for the essay, and there is a logical conclusion summarizing the trends.

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