The following two pie charts give the results of a survey into the popularity of various leisure activities among European adults in 1985 and 1995. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The
presented
two pie charts illustrate data about various popular leisure activities of European adults in 1985 and 1995.
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Overall
, it is clear that
in 1985 nearly a third of people
were wasting their leisure time mostly by watching TV
. However
, in 1995 most people
also
had chosen to watch TV
or play computer games. Notably, an almost equal percentage of people
prefer to watch TV
in both years.
In accordance with the pie chart in 1985 people
mostly preferred to watch TV
rather than eat out and the percentage of people
who chose to watch TV
was 32%, while
eating out was 23%. Moreover
, roughly one fifth
of Add a hyphen
one-fifth
people
wasted their leisure time by talking with friends and to
talking with family. Change preposition
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Also
, 6% of people
did other activities.
Furthermore
, almost one third
of adults in 1995 preferred to watch Add a hyphen
one-third
TV
, and the second most popular activity was playing computer games. Due to
developing technologies, roughly a quarter chose to play computer games, while
talking with friends was almost equal. Also
talking with family and eating out was the same proportion. Whilst, 2% of adults chose other activities.Submitted by akzharkynzhamal on
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