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of crimes for

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groups and the pie chart illustrates 4 types of criminal which are violent ,property ,drug and public order in the UK

last

year.

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, the

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of 20

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the highest criminal

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while

the smallest percentage was public order

crime

in the pie chart. At first glance, we can say that the people who are the

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amount

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because their

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%0

whereas

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age

of 12 the criminal ratio

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started

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with almost 5 thousand people

while

, between 44 and 60

age

groups have followed around 10.000 and 20. 000

crime

rate. When it comes to

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chart the

crime

which was violent accounted for %46 of the total

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, as opposed to the public order

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had the smallest percentage of

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people by %9

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last

year compared to other ratios of crimes which were property and drug respectively %23 and %22

last

year in the UK.