The pie charts show information about energy production in a country in two separate years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, by make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts show information about energy production in a country in two separate years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, by make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie diagram illustrates the 1995 and 2005 energy production of a country.
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, we observe that, during both years coal was the main source of energy. Almost similar trends were observed for gas.
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, in 2005 the amount of electricity generated from the Nuclear fuel has increased.
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, power generation from petrol has remained the same. On closer examination, it can be seen that
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1995 and 2005 approximately 60% of the electricity generation was done by Coal and Gas plants, of which around 30% came from Coals.
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, in 1995, Nuclear power plants generated nearly 6.4% of the total power. But in 2005,
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figure was 10.10%. For
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number was 29.27% and 19.55%, in 1995 and 2005 respectively. In 1995, out of every 100 units of current generated 4.9 units were from some other sources, in 2005,
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value doubled and reached 9.10 units.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • proportion
  • percentage
  • increase
  • decrease
  • production
  • energy source
  • fossil fuels
  • renewable energy
  • non-renewable energy
  • comparison
  • major/minor changes
  • phased out
  • introduced
  • contribution
  • total energy output
  • environmental impact
  • economic impact
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