The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now and plans for its development.
The maps illustrate Islip town centre nowadays and future development plans for
town
centre.
Add an article
the town
a town
Overall
, there are going to change considerably on
around the Change preposition
apply
counrtyside
. Correct your spelling
countryside
In
present, shops are located on Change preposition
At
north
side Add an article
the north
the
map. Change preposition
of the
However
, planned
construction of Add an article
the planned
building
Correct article usage
the building
breaksdown
shops Correct your spelling
breaks down
breakdown
to
four Change preposition
into
venue
. (Bus station, shopping centre, car park, new housing).
Below Change to a plural noun
venues
to
the previous shop, Change preposition
apply
main
road Correct article usage
the main
using
will changed only for individuals. Verb problem
apply
In addition
, it is considered to built
Change the verb
build
new
dual carriageway.
In spite of Correct article usage
a new
development
of shops and some roads, on the south side of the map, (Add an article
the development
external
part of Correct article usage
the external
carriageway
)Add an article
the carriageway
school
and housing still remain Fix the agreement mistake
schools
both
Change preposition
on both
of
maps without any change. The park will be smaller Change preposition
apply
size
than nowadays. Change preposition
in size
Also
, some new householding are
added by Change the verb form
is
developer
.Add an article
the developer
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