You are going to study in a college in the UK next year. You would like to stay in a college Hall of Residence. Write a letter to the college giving your accommodation requirements. You should outline what your room and food needs are and also ask what alternatives are available if they cannot provide what you want. You should write at least 150 words. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You do NOT need to write your own address.
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Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing
this
letter regarding my residence requirements for next semester.
My name is Waris Saroye and I am a student of business management, I will move to the United Kingdom in
the next year. I would like to inform you Change preposition
apply
some
of my needs Change preposition
of some
such
as I need a room which must have a bed, table and a chair along with
an almirah. It should be near to the campus. Moreover
, as I have to eat from the campus kitchen
, so please note down
that I have Change preposition
apply
alregies
to peanuts Correct your spelling
allergies
also
I can only eat indian
food.
Meanwhile, if for some reason you are not able to accomplish my needs please let me know Change the capitalization
Indian
before hand
Correct your spelling
beforehand
,
so that we can think Remove the comma
apply
some
of the other options like Change preposition
of some
provide
meWrong verb form
providing
a
access to cooking area where I can prepare my own meals. Add the preposition
with a
As well as
, if Rephrase
Also
room
will be far away from Add an article
the room
college
help me to find private accommodation if you can.
Hopefully, you will consider my request. Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours Sincerely,
RajCorrect article usage
the college
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single idea per paragraph
Ensure each paragraph covers a single main idea to enhance clarity and reading flow.
suitable writing tone
Use a more formal tone to maintain appropriateness for the context of a formal request letter.
complete response
You have identified specific room and food requirements, effectively covering the task prompt.
greeting and closing
Your letter begins with a clear purpose and ends with an appropriate closing, making it easy to follow.