Write a letter to a sports club. Tell them you are not satisfied with the service and have already let them know about this. Write ▪What exactly wrong with their service ▪What happened after you complained the first time ▪What you want the club to do after your letter

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Dear Sir/Madam, Hope you are doing splendidly! I am writing

this

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letter to show my

disappointments

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disappointment

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with some of the facilities

club

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the club

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is providing. I would like to address some issues

such

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as the

bathroom

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bathroom's

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lack

cleaning

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of cleaning

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. There is always a bad smell which

bothered

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bothers

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everyone.

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, there are no lockers in

changing

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the changing

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area

because

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and because

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this

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I lost my sports kit.

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this

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staff

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the staff

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of the sports facility never listen to

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the player

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player

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players

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similarly

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they never pay attention to our mistakes.

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, I already

write

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wrote

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it down

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down

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apply

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to the manager many times but no one

care

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cared

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about

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letter. Unfortunately, I never get any response. Meanwhile, if you receive my letter please pay attention

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these obstacles and solve them with your best efforts.

Otherwise

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, I have to leave

this

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place. Hopefully, you will consider my request. Looking forward to

receive

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receiving

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best

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the best

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services from you. Yours Sincerely, Raj

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logical structure

Ensure that each paragraph focuses on a single main point or idea to enhance clarity.

complete response

Try to provide more details about what you expect the club to do after receiving the letter, such as specific actions or resolutions.

suitable writing tone

The formal and polite tone of the letter is appropriate and effectively conveys the writer's concerns.

greeting and closing

The letter includes both a greeting and a closing, making it well-rounded and professional.

Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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7
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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
18
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

148 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

unsatisfactory
maintenance
equipment
customer service
resolve
complaint
acknowledged
immediate action
compensation
inconvenience
disregarded

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Write a letter to a sports club. Tell them you are not satisfied with the service and have already let them know about this. Write ▪What exactly wrong with their service ▪What happened after you complained the first time ▪What you want the club to do after your letter

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Scientific research should be funded by governments rather than commercial organizations. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Television dominates the free-time of too many people. It can make people lazy and prevent them from socializing with others. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that schools do not do enough to teach young people about how to look after their health. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

With the increased global demand for oil and gas, undiscovered areas of the world should be opened up to access more of these natural resources. To what extent do you agree?

People from many countries are marrying later and having fewer children. Give reasons why this is happening. Are there any positive or negative developments regarding this?