the maps below show the centre of a small town called ISLIP as it is now,and plans for its development. summerise the information by selecting and reporting the ,main features,and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps depict the

centre

of a tiny town which is called Islip as it is now

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and

plans

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for its development.

Overall

, Islip town

centre

is a small area with minimum facilities. Plans are set to make the city

centre

more urbanized with bigger shopping places and new

housings

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. Looking at the details, Islip town

centre

has only one main road with two

side

roads

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one of these

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roads ends

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the park. In the future, the main road is projected to be pedestrianized and the

side

roads are going to be converted to a dual carriageway. Travelling around the city will be far

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easier by

this

conversion and people will shop confidently walking through the pedestrianized way. Shops in the north of the city will change to a big shopping

centre

. There will be a bus station on the left

side

and

also

a car park on the right

side

of the shopping

centre

. By developing the countryside,

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new housing is going to be constructed on the east

side

of the map. Shops in the

centre

will remain the same but the housing on the

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bottom

of the map is going to be more developed in the future.