The line graphs below show the subscriptions to mobile and fixed phone lines in four different countries between 2005 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. Mobile phone subscriptions

The line graphs below show the subscriptions to mobile and fixed phone lines in four different countries between 2005 and 2015.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

Mobile phone subscriptions
The two-line charts give data regarding cell phone
as well as
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landline
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land line
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users in four different nations in a decade from 2005
Overall
, Though the mobile customers in all 4 nations increased ,
Uruguay
and
India
had a steep rise ,
whereas
in the
UK
and
Eritrea
, it was slow and steady .
Furthermore
, telephone demand grew in
Uruguay
and
Eritrea
, but declined in others The data shows that in 5 years of time from 2005,
Uruguay
crossed over the
UK
in pocket phones and peaked in 2013 at around 150% .
In addition
,
India
and
Eritrea
started from almost similar ranges.
While
India
reached around 60% by 2015,
Eritrea
still remained close to 5% .
However
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the
UK
maintained the number of people using mobiles above 100% from 2006
It is clear that
dial phone subscribers declined in the
UK
and
India
. In the
UK
it dropped to 50 from 60 .
whereas
in
India
It began close to 5% and reduced
further
.
Meanwhile
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Eritrea
and
Uruguay
had a rise in landline customers even though the increase is minimal
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Vocabulary: Replace the words uruguay, india, uk, eritrea with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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