The line graphs below show the subscriptions to mobile and fixed phone lines in four different countries between 2005 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. Mobile phone subscriptions
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The two-line charts give data regarding cell phone
as well as
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landline
land line
users in four different nations in a decade from 2005
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landline
Overall
, Though the mobile customers in all 4 nations increased , Uruguay
and India
had a steep rise , whereas
in the UK
and Eritrea
, it was slow and steady . Furthermore
, telephone demand grew in Uruguay
and Eritrea
, but declined in others
The data shows that in 5 years of time from 2005, Uruguay
crossed over the UK
in pocket phones and peaked in 2013 at around 150% .In addition
,India
and Eritrea
started from almost similar ranges. While
India
reached around 60% by 2015, Eritrea
still remained close to 5% .However
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However,
UK
maintained the number of people using mobiles above 100% from 2006
It is clear that
dial phone subscribers declined in the UK
and India
. In the UK
it dropped to 50 from 60 . whereas
in India
It began close to 5% and reduced further
.Meanwhile
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Meanwhile,
Eritrea
and Uruguay
had a rise in landline customers even though the increase is minimalSubmitted by drcamt on
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