The line graphs below show the subscriptions to mobile and fixed phone lines in four different countries between 2005 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. Mobile phone subscriptions

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The two-line charts give data regarding cell phone

as well as

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users in four different nations in a decade from 2005

Overall

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, Though the mobile customers in all 4 nations increased ,

Uruguay

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and

India

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had a steep rise ,

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in the

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and

Eritrea

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, it was slow and steady .

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, telephone demand grew in

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and

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, but declined in others The data shows that in 5 years of time from 2005,

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crossed over the

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in pocket phones and peaked in 2013 at around 150% .

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India

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and

Eritrea

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started from almost similar ranges.

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reached around 60% by 2015,

Eritrea

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still remained close to 5% .

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the

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maintained the number of people using mobiles above 100% from 2006

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dial phone subscribers declined in the

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and

India

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. In the

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it dropped to 50 from 60 .

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It began close to 5% and reduced

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Eritrea

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and

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had a rise in landline customers even though the increase is minimal

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