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it is widely claimed that few Linking Words
people
devote Use synonyms
time
less on Use synonyms
hobbies
nowadays, others argue that there are numerous Use synonyms
factor
that Fix the agreement mistake
factors
contributing
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contribute
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such
effects both individually and socially. Both Change preposition
to such
cause
and effect of Correct article usage
the cause
this
worrying trend will be elaborated on Linking Words
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this
essay.
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in this
To begin
with, it may Linking Words
seems
sensible for some to believe that leisure activities Change the verb form
seem
often
overlooked Add a missing verb
are often
from
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by
the
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apply
society
these days as Use synonyms
an
intense competition among the employment industries. Remove the article
apply
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is Linking Words
possibly
because they generally viewed it as an activity for personal entertainment and not Replace the adverb
possible
that
productive Correct word choice
as
like
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as
self-improvements
. Fix the agreement mistake
self-improvement
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, Linking Words
a
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apply
white collar
labour Add a hyphen
white-collar
spent
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spend
time
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on
working rather than spending Change preposition
apply
time
on Use synonyms
themselve
just to relax which Correct your spelling
themselves
left
them with Wrong verb form
leaves
fews
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few
hour
per day to do Fix the agreement mistake
hours
such
creative activities on a daily basis, preferably they will choose to sleep than Linking Words
doing
anything else.
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do
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, I personally argue in favour of its effects seeing that it indeed Linking Words
affect
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affects
people
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either
personal or social aspects. In Change preposition
in either
term
of personal perspective, Fix the agreement mistake
terms
hobbies
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is
a creative Change the verb form
are
ways
of relieving stress from work, without getting it Change the noun form
way
release
through Wrong verb form
released
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this
activities can create mental illness in later Correct determiner usage
these
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time
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times
such
as depression and stress-related Linking Words
disorder
. In a bigger picture, the effect on Fix the agreement mistake
disorders
society
could not seen clearly like individual Use synonyms
aspect
, yet fewer hours Fix the agreement mistake
aspects
on
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of
leisures
activity can affect Change the noun form
leisure
the
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apply
society
tremendously. Use synonyms
Hobbies
provide a practice for Use synonyms
people
to use their imagination and skills, without them Use synonyms
the
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apply
society
will be lifeless. Use synonyms
For instance
, Linking Words
people
will always Use synonyms
serious
and formal manner.
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be serious
although
it is undeniable that Linking Words
few
hours Correct article usage
a few
is
likely to be used for Correct subject-verb agreement
are
hobbies
recently, I am of the opinion that it does Use synonyms
effect
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affect
the
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apply
people
both Use synonyms
in
small to large scale and should not be neglected in order to create a meaningful Change preposition
on
society
.Use synonyms
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