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The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
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The diagrams give information about the distribution of Anthropology graduates from one university in five different categories and the comparison wages in three types of employment.
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, it can be clearly seen that the largest portion of destination was allocated to full-time
work
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,
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 part-time
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 + postgrad study contributed to the
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 segment.
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, the highest salaries were dominated by the government sector. In terms of destination of Anthropology alumnae, full-time
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 constituted over half of the total number.
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, Part-time
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 and unemployment made up 15% and 12%, respectively. Interestingly, the figure for full-time postgrad study and
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 known were tied at exactly 8% and the lowest number of contributions was made by part-time
work
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 + postgrad study. Regarding the salaries of Anthropology graduates, Freelance consultants and the Government sector accounted for fair at 80% of $75.000-$100.000 and 20% of $25.000-$74.9999.
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, Private companies comprised 55% of $75.000-$100.000 and $25.000-$74.9999 was directed towards private companies.

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words work with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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