The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
A glance at the line graph delineates information about the commensurability of the number of merchandise moved throughout Britain using diverse
transportation
systems from 1974 to 2002. Overall
, it can explicitly be perceived that roads became the main system of transportation
in this
country. While
moving the goods through water and rail had approximately as much amount in the rudimentary year of the question, the gap extended at the end
where the quantity of the former was higher than that of the latter. Pipelines, which had the last
ranking, also
contributed to this
gentrification.
Looking into more details for the most prominent system, increasing from almost 70 million
tones in 1974 to roughly 72 million
tones in 1978, the commodities transportation
using autos then
saw some fluctuation onwards, culminating in just under 99 million
tones in 2002. Ships and boats were utilized as the second facilities by just under 40 million
tonnes
until 1978. Henceforth, the number of goods transported via water systems increased exponentially to somewhere in the vicinity of 58 million
tonnes
during the next four years before leveling
off for a decade. After a downward trend to the year 1998, which is 50 Change the spelling
levelling
million
tonnes
, the amount reached just over 65 million
tonnes
.
In terms of the following rankings, rail networks had virtually the same level till 1978 compared to water systems and then
vacillated several times over the chronological period, terminating without any quantity altercations with respect to the first year. The proportion of transportation
devoted to pipelines generally showed a relative growth of seven times over the period from 3 million
tonnes
in 1974, accompanied by some plateaus without any distinguished decline.Submitted by mohammadhassan.rajati on
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