The chart below shows the proportion of staff employed by age in the public sector in the UK in 2015 and 2020. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the proportion of staff employed by age in the public sector in the UK in 2015 and 2020. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts illustrate the percentage of employment in the UK public department between the
years
2015 and 2020 and these are classified into 5 main groups of age; under 21, 21-30, 31-40,41-50, and over 50
years
old.
Overall
, one noticeable feature of the data is that people aged 21-50
years
old are employed the most proportion collectively,
while
the over 50-year-old group was hired almost a quarter in 2015 and
then
declined by one-third in the following five
years
.
Furthermore
, the under 21
years
old hardly vary over the
years
,with a slight drop in recruitment. For the age between 21-30
years
old,
this
category was employed at a quarter in 2015 and rose to almost one-third in 2020. The individuals aged 41-50
years
old show a similar pattern,varying from under one-fifth to over one-fourth during the time.
Conversely
, the rest reveal a different variation of decrease after 5
years
. Interestingly for the middle age,31-40
years
old, the recruitment halved in 2020.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words years with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • proportion
  • public sector
  • employment trends
  • age demographics
  • experienced professionals
  • demand for stability
  • employment proportion
  • retirement trends
  • policy changes
  • value experience
  • age brackets
  • consistent demand
  • notable decrease/increase
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