The graph below shows information about the use of public transport in one country, by age group and location of residence, in 2016. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows information about the use of public transport in one country, by age group and location of residence, in 2016. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph given illustrates data about how different
age
groups used public
transport
in one country in 2016.
Overall
, the people who live in large
cities
tend to use more public
transport
, except elderly people who have the lowest proportion in the chart. Meanwhile, the other citizens in comparison to the larger
cities
, the public
transport
used by them has the lowest proportion,
while
the citizens who live in big
cities
have the highest rankings. The people between the
age
group 31- 45 who live in larger
cities
,
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travel the most with public
transport
having almost 70%, which puts them in the first place in the line graph,
also
the
age
group that lives in big
cities
between 16-30 use over 50% of public
transport
,
while
the others ones only use over 20% of public
transport
. Both residents have their lowest proportion in the
age
group between 61- 75.
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