You have just read an aticle in a national newspaper which claims that town centres in your coinith all look very similar to each other. You don't fully agree with this opinion. Write a letter to the editor of the newspaper. In your letter say which points in the article you agree with • explain ways in which your town centre is different from most other town centres • offer to give a guided tour of your town to the writer of the article

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing in response
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your article which you published in national newspaper"THE ARTICLE". I
am not agree
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do not agree

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with your statement that all
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center
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centers

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are looking
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same
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in my country.  It is not deniable that some of your points are correct. As you mentioned
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some buildings and streets are similar to one another
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facade and
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the market

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around it. And each
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center
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has a round park in
middle
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the middle

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of the intersection with the statue of freedom fighters of our country.
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, I completely disagree with
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the explanation

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of
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building
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each
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. I believe that all buildings have different infrastructure and front
view
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views

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. Some towns are under development and some are well developed to explore everything in them. I want to invite you to our
town
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tour as I want to show you all
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things in our locality.
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you get to know all
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the differences

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of each
town
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town
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. Whenever you get time to explore our
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let me know,
I
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and I

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will help you with all
good
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places to see. I hope
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letter helps you and see you soon. Yours sincerely, Jas

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Ensure that you address all parts of the task in detail, giving concrete examples wherever possible.
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Maintain a consistent and formal tone throughout the letter. Some sentences can be revised for clarity and formality.
coherence cohesion
Try to organize your letter more effectively by grouping similar ideas together and ensuring smooth transitions between them.
coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph contains a single main idea and is developed sufficiently to support your overall argument.
coherence cohesion
You provided a polite greeting and closing, which are appropriate for a formal letter.
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You included specific points you agree with as well as those you disagree with, showing a balanced argument.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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