You have just read an aticle in a national newspaper which claims that town centres in your coinith all look very similar to each other. You don't fully agree with this opinion. Write a letter to the editor of the newspaper. In your letter say which points in the article you agree with • explain ways in which your town centre is different from most other town centres • offer to give a guided tour of your town to the writer of the article
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Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing in response
of
your article which you published in national newspaper"THE ARTICLE". I Change preposition
to
am not agree
with your statement that all Change the verb form
do not agree
town
center
Fix the agreement mistake
centers
are looking
Wrong verb form
look
same
in my country.
It is not deniable that some of your points are correct. As you mentioned Correct article usage
the same
that
some buildings and streets are similar to one another Correct word choice
apply
such
as library
facade and Correct article usage
the library
market
around it. And each Correct article usage
the market
town
center
has a round park in Change the spelling
centre
middle
of the intersection with the statue of freedom fighters of our country.
Add an article
the middle
However
, I completely disagree with explanation
of Add an article
the explanation
same
building Correct article usage
the same
of
each Change preposition
in
town
. I believe that all buildings have different infrastructure and front view
. Some towns are under development and some are well developed to explore everything in them.
I want to invite you to our Fix the agreement mistake
views
town
for guided
tour as I want to show you all Add an article
a guided
best
things in our locality. Correct article usage
the best
Then
you get to know all differences
of each Correct article usage
the differences
town
town
. Whenever you get time to explore our town
let me know, I
will help you with all Correct word choice
and I
good
places to see.
I hope Correct article usage
the good
this
letter helps you and see you soon.
Yours sincerely,
JasSubmitted by jaskirat959 on
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task achievement
Ensure that you address all parts of the task in detail, giving concrete examples wherever possible.
task achievement
Maintain a consistent and formal tone throughout the letter. Some sentences can be revised for clarity and formality.
coherence cohesion
Try to organize your letter more effectively by grouping similar ideas together and ensuring smooth transitions between them.
coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph contains a single main idea and is developed sufficiently to support your overall argument.
coherence cohesion
You provided a polite greeting and closing, which are appropriate for a formal letter.
task achievement
You included specific points you agree with as well as those you disagree with, showing a balanced argument.
Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.
‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.
Examples:
I really want to study but I’m too tired.
I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.
If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.
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