The three pie charts present how much time each group of students spend in a British university library.
The three pie charts present how much time each group of
students
spend in a British university library
.
For
example
more than half of postgraduates use the Add a comma
example,
library
for more than 15 hours in comparison to undergraduates
,whose figures of that section just
9 per cent.
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are just
However
,in case
of all Correct article usage
the case
students
most time in Add a comma
students,
library
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the library
spend
just 15 per cent,which Wrong verb form
is spent
much
closer to Add a missing verb
is much
proportion
of Add an article
the proportion
a proportion
undergraduates
.Remarkably,postgraduates have also
obvious
difference in Add an article
an obvious
the obvious
number
of Change the article
a number
the number
students
who passed from 1 to 7 hours.Just 17 per cent against almost two out of three of
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apply
undergraduates
and exactly one half
of all Add a hyphen
one-half
students
.By contrast
, no one team showed considerable
gap in average spending from 8 to 14 hours.Add an article
a considerable
the considerable
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was visible everywhere,somewhere a little more or less.
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One-third
cleat
from the data that postgraduates use the Correct your spelling
clear
library
most,undergraduates
less and all students
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