The table below shows the percentage use of four different fuel types to generate electricity in five Asian countries in 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. Fuel type used to generate electricity (%)

The table below shows the percentage use of four different fuel types to generate electricity in five Asian countries in 2005.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

Fuel type used to generate electricity (%)
The table below illustrates the use of the fuel types for generating electricity which was four items of percentage in five Asian countries in 2005.
Overall
, it can be seen that coal and lignite had the highest in Malaysia
while
the lowest was nuclear in Thailand. On the one hand, Looking at the tables in detail, Malaysia is the biggest which started with coal and lignite at 61, followed by nuclear at 19. And
then
, the lowest were petroleum products,
hydro
and
wind
and others just under ten per
cent
.
Moreover
, Japan was the second largest nuclear which was at 49, followed by another 39. The
next,
coal and lignite, petroleum products,
hydro
and
wind
and others just below seven per
cent
.
In addition
, South Korea the third biggest which were
hydro
and
wind
began at 48, followed by nuclear at 33. The next other items were just under 12.
On the other hand
, regarding the lowest data, Thailand started at 42 in other items, followed by petrolatum products at 36, and
it
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followed by
hydro
and
wind
at 19. Another item is just under four per
cent
.
Furthermore
, Singapore began at 39 in others, followed by coal and lignite at 42. The
next
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is nuclear at 13. Another item was just under four per
cent
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 77%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words hydro, wind, cent with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "just under" was used 4 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • proportion
  • dominant
  • reliance
  • predominantly
  • notable contrast
  • diversity
  • energy mix
  • resource availability
  • economic consideration
  • government policy
  • energy generation
  • percentage
  • fuel types
  • electricity production
  • comparative analysis
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