the maps below show the layout of a university's sports centre now,and how it will look after redevelopment. summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature,and make comparision where relevant.

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The pictures depict the map of a university’s sports centre now, and how it is set to look after rebuilding.

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, it can be seen that the

sport

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centre is going to be bigger by expansion to the outdoor courts and it is planned to have

much

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more facilities. Looking at the details, the changing room, reception, seating and 25m pool will be the same in the future plan. One of the major changes will be the construction of a leisure pool

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the west side of the

sport

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club and another change will be the building of a sports hall near the seating. Looking at the east side, two dance studios are projected to be built and an extra changing room will be at the bottom of the studios. Another changing room will be on the

west south

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of the map. These new changing rooms are so necessary

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increasing

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number of

sport

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centre’s

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members. The Gym on the top of the map will be erected in future

plan

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. Another striking change will be the introduction of a sports shop and

also

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a café which help the members to enjoy their leisure time after finishing their workout.

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the maps below show the layout of a university's sports centre now,and how it will look after redevelopment. summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature,and make comparision where relevant.

Some people think that govements should spend money for faster public transportation , others think that there are other important priortities . Discuss both views and give your opinion

Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation,such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money.others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Give your opinion.

Many children no longer read books and instead spend their time using modern technology. While some people think this is a positive trend, others think it is a problem. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Every year several languages die out. This is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree?