the maps below show the layout of a university's sports centre now,and how it will look after redevelopment. summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature,and make comparision where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for the maps below show the layout of a university's sports centre now,and how it will look after redevelopment. summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature,and make comparision where relevant.

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The pictures depict the map of a university’s sports centre now, and how it is set to look after rebuilding.

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, it can be seen that the

sport

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centre is going to be bigger by expansion to the outdoor courts and it is planned to have

much

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many

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more facilities. Looking at the details, the changing room, reception, seating and 25m pool will be the same in the future plan. One of the major changes will be the construction of a leisure pool

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the west side of the

sport

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club and another change will be the building of a sports hall near the seating. Looking at the east side, two dance studios are projected to be built and an extra changing room will be at the bottom of the studios. Another changing room will be on the

west south

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of the map. These new changing rooms are so necessary

due to

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increasing

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the increasing

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number of

sport

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sports

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centre’s

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centre

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members. The Gym on the top of the map will be erected in future

plan

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plans

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. Another striking change will be the introduction of a sports shop and

also

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a café which help the members to enjoy their leisure time after finishing their workout.

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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

2 paragraphs

199 words

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the maps below show the layout of a university's sports centre now,and how it will look after redevelopment. summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature,and make comparision where relevant.

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In many countries schools have severe problems with students behaviour. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest？

Making a lot of money is the only way to evaluate whether someone else is successful. To what extent do you agree or disagree with it? Write 300 words of an academic essay about it using your explanation and specific examples to support your answers.

In future, people may no longer be able to pay for things in shops using cash. All payments may have to be made by card or using phones. Do you think this will happen one day ? Why do you think some people might not be happy to give up using cash?