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The graph below shows the amount of money spent on books in Germany, France, Italy and Austria between 1995 and 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the amount of money spent on books in Germany, France, Italy and Austria between 1995 and 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph provides information about the
amount
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 of currency spent on novels in four Europe countries from 1995 to 2005.
Overall
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 , it can be seen that the US
dollars
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 paid for booklets experienced an upward trend in Germany ,France , Italy and Austria over the period .
To begin
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 with , in 1995, in Germany large
amount
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 of money was spent on booklets. It was approximately 80
million
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dollars
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 in 1995 and increased to 90
million
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dollars
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 in 1999 .
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, from 1999 to 2003, the investment spent on novels declined and
then
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 rose to 100
million
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dollars
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 in 2005.
Furthermore
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 , cash spent on books in 1995 in France and Italy was 54
million
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dollars
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 and 50
million
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dollars
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 respectively. The statistics rose dramatically to 72
million
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dollars
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 until 2005.
However
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, from 1997 to 2005, the
amount
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 of cash being spent on notes showed fluctuation.
Moreover
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 , in 1995 , the least
amount
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 of money was spent on books accounting for 30
million
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 US
dollars
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 . The numbers rose slightly to 40
million
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dollars
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 in 1999 and remained steady until 2001,
whereas
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 from 2001 to 2005 ,the paid
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 on books increased swiftly to 70
million
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dollars
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 .

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Vocabulary: Replace the words amount, dollars, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • spending patterns
  • steady increase
  • notable growth
  • highest spending
  • moderate increase
  • significant growth
  • comparative analysis
  • cultural investment
  • economic trends
  • over the period
  • consistently higher
  • between X and Y
  • relative starting point
  • year-on-year increase
  • expenditure on books
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