The chart below shows the value of one country's export in various categories during 2015 and 2016. the table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summrarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the value of one country's export in various categories during 2015 and 2016. the table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summrarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar
chart
provides information about exports in different methods of one country in the years 2015 and 2016. The table
chart
illustrates the proportion of change in values after a 1-year period.
Overall
, in the first
chart
, the highest
petroleum
products
,
while
the smallest
textiles
.
Furthermore
, in the second
chart
, the biggest percentage of
textiles
, compared to the lowest percentage of agricultural
products
. In terms of 2015 export earnings the highest made up of
petroleum
products
and engineered goods around 60,
while
gems and jewellery comprised about just over a third
in contrast
, agricultural
products
and
textiles
fell by 25 billion, and in 2016
petroleum
products
and engineered goods fell by 57 billion, compared to gems and jewellery unchanging. Agricultural
products
and
textiles
made up 30 billion after a 1-year period. Respectively, the percentage change in values between 2015 and 2016 was the highest;
textiles
comprised 15.24%,
while
agricultural
products
made up 0,81%, compared to gems and jewellery at 5.18%. The proportion of engineered goods and
petroleum
products
is around 5%.
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