The graph below shows the usage of oil in four different countries between 1966 and 2006 as a percentage of total energuy use within each nation.

The graph below shows the usage of oil in four different countries between 1966 and 2006 as a percentage of total energuy use within each nation.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below shows the usage of oil in four different countries between 1966 and 2006 as a percentage of total energuy use within each nation.
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The given graph illustrates the percentage of
oil
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used by
Iceland
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,
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Swedan
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Sweden
, Italy and Turkey from 1966 until 2006. It is very clear from the graph that Italy is
highest
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the highest
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consumer of
oil
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in the
year
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1966 with about 90%, followed by
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Swedan
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Sweden
with 80%. The
oil
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consumption of Italy has remained similar throughout the years,
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however
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however,
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the
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Swedan
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Sweden
has reduced its usage to almost 30% by 2006. The
oil
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usage of
Iceland
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in 1966 was 70%. Alike
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Swedan
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Sweden
,
Iceland
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has controlled its usage reaching a minimum of 20% in 2006.
on the other hand
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, Turkey
has
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used only 60% of
oil
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in 1996, which was the least in that
year
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.
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, the consumption has increased in the following years and has maximised to 90% in the
year
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2006. In conclusion, Italy was the highest and Turkey was the lowest consumer of
oil
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in the
year
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1966.
In
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addition
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addition,
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Swedan
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Sweden
and
Iceland
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has
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have
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reduced
it
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their
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consumption
less
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by less
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than 40 % by the
year
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2006.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Vocabulary: Replace the words oil, iceland, swedan, year with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reduced" was used 2 times.
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