The pie charts below compare the proportion of energy capacity in gigawatts (GW) in 2015 with the predictions for 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts below compare the proportion of energy capacity in gigawatts (GW) in 2015 with the predictions for 2040.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The presented two pie charts compare data about the percentage of
energy
that was made and will be made by 5 different resources in 2 various years ( 2015 and 2040) per gigawatts.
Overall
, the number of
energy
which will be produced will be increased;
moreover
, the best
energy
capacity for Fossil fuel, and the
last
one is Solar and in the future will be Nuclear.
According to
the 2015 plot, the number of
energy
that was manufactured was 6.688 and the main section which generated
energy
was Fossil fuel with 64%;
then
other renewables had the second level by 23%. The third ones were wind and nuclear which had nearly the same proportion.
In addition
, the
last
one was solar, which had a 2%. The 2040 plot demonstrates the figure of
energy
will has been climbing to 11.678.
Also
, an important generator will be absolutely the same as in the past, yet the amount of it will have a 20% decline;
furthermore
,
secondly
, will be other renewables;
however
, it will have the same trend as the
last
one and will be falling to 21%.
Nevertheless
, solar, having the minimum number, will reach the third level by 18%. Wind
,
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will like Solar go up and it will be having 7% jump.
Although
, Nuclear will be roughly the same as in 2015.
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