The graph below gives information about changes in the birth and death rates in New Zealand between 1901 and 2101. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph depicts the changes in
birth
and Use synonyms
death
rates in New Zealand from 1901 to 2101.
It can be clearly seen that the Use synonyms
birth
Use synonyms
rate
has shown significant fluctuations over the period, Use synonyms
while
the Linking Words
death
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rate
exhibits a steady increase. At Use synonyms
first,
between 1901 and 1961, the Linking Words
birth
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rate
rose from around 27,000 to 50,000 births per year, experiencing notable peaks and troughs. After 1961, it peaked at approximately 65,000 births around 1961, Use synonyms
then
gradually declined to about 50,000 by 2001.
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By contrast
, the Linking Words
death
Use synonyms
rate
has steadily increased from about 10,000 in 1901 to around 25,000 in 2001. Notably, projections indicate that the Use synonyms
death
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rate
will continue to rise, surpassing the Use synonyms
birth
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rate
around 2041. By 2101, the Use synonyms
death
Use synonyms
rate
is expected to reach nearly 60,000, Use synonyms
while
the Linking Words
birth
Use synonyms
rate
will decline to just above 40,000.
In summary, Use synonyms
while
Linking Words
birth
rates in New Zealand have fluctuated significantly over the past century, they are projected to decline steadily. Meanwhile, the Use synonyms
death
Use synonyms
rate
has shown a consistent upward trend and is expected to continue increasing, eventually surpassing the Use synonyms
birth
Use synonyms
rate
around 2041.Use synonyms
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